See, that last post freaked a couple people out. I told you it's not really how I feel, but I can understand feeling like that. It's like, that's not where I am, but sometimes I can see it from here. It was wordsmithing. And it really was interesting to see how much impact and effect my words can have. That actually was encouraging.
Now here's a little piece I submitted to a Christian magazine, for their Hope edition, and this I truly do feel.
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My son’s paralysis, caused by an IED blast in Iraq, is my sorrow. The Lord’s faithfulness is my hope - Jeremiah 29:11 (NIV) “For I know the plans I have for you," declares the LORD, "plans to prosper you and not to harm you, plans to give you hope and a future.”
I know the attack that injured my son was not my Father’s will. I know the enemy, physical and spiritual, wanted him dead. But my son is alive! The enemy hurt him but was unable to kill him. Where there is life, there is hope. God’s Word itself is Life, and so it is hope. There are many verses of healing in Scripture, promises from God, and I am standing on those promises, just like the old hymn says.
God’s will is for our good. But there is no denying we live in a fallen world, where the Lord’s will is not always evident to our human eyes. So I ask myself, “Who is the expert here, me or God?”, and of course I must answer, God is the expert. He knows. He sees the end, when I can barely see my next step. The Lord sings over me, and my family, when I have no words to speak. We are not here alone. The Lord Jesus leads the way. He knows the path, and if I can’t see the path, at least I can see Him.
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It might be a few months before I know if this is accepted or not, but I couldn't make myself wait that long to post it.
Thursday, January 27, 2011
Friday, January 7, 2011
Don't be too frightened
This free-verse poem is the darkest, blackest, worst thing I have ever written. I don't really feel like this although I can imagine feeling like this. But an incident at a bank the other day really set me off and I just went with it.
PAIN
I would vomit angry fists of rage.
But I push them down, silence them for the world, and they pound against the inside of the facade that is my face. They pound against the back of that wall until it is slick with their blood.
I would scream swinging aluminum bats of hate.
But I push them back, protecting those around me, and they hammer viciously against the base of my skull. They rise from my lungs, beating against my tightened throat with the “ping,ping” of cold hard metal.
There is no direction I can turn.
All the compass points are cruel barbed fishhooks, straightened with hateful intent, pinning me into myself, snagging my flinching skin with rust-filled sickening pain if I move.
I cannot speak or I will gag out the fists of rage.
I cannot scream or the thug-swung aluminum bats of hate will crush the skulls of innocents around me.
I cannot turn or torn metal pain will rip the skin from my muscles in thin, horrible strips of blood-shaped shivering agony.
So I stand. I shuffle. I silently wretch horror. I taste it, like dead children.
If I don’t smile you think me sullen. If I don’t reply you think me rude. But if I open my mouth you may see inside my head. You would kneel in the street and beat your skull against the curb, beat it to a bone-fragment clotted sack of brains so you wouldn’t witness the red-black churning razor blade landscape of emptiness and pain that is the blood hacking its way through my veins.
Be thankful I seem rude. It’s the best protection I can offer you.
PAIN
I would vomit angry fists of rage.
But I push them down, silence them for the world, and they pound against the inside of the facade that is my face. They pound against the back of that wall until it is slick with their blood.
I would scream swinging aluminum bats of hate.
But I push them back, protecting those around me, and they hammer viciously against the base of my skull. They rise from my lungs, beating against my tightened throat with the “ping,ping” of cold hard metal.
There is no direction I can turn.
All the compass points are cruel barbed fishhooks, straightened with hateful intent, pinning me into myself, snagging my flinching skin with rust-filled sickening pain if I move.
I cannot speak or I will gag out the fists of rage.
I cannot scream or the thug-swung aluminum bats of hate will crush the skulls of innocents around me.
I cannot turn or torn metal pain will rip the skin from my muscles in thin, horrible strips of blood-shaped shivering agony.
So I stand. I shuffle. I silently wretch horror. I taste it, like dead children.
If I don’t smile you think me sullen. If I don’t reply you think me rude. But if I open my mouth you may see inside my head. You would kneel in the street and beat your skull against the curb, beat it to a bone-fragment clotted sack of brains so you wouldn’t witness the red-black churning razor blade landscape of emptiness and pain that is the blood hacking its way through my veins.
Be thankful I seem rude. It’s the best protection I can offer you.
Sunday, January 2, 2011
White writing
Another poem from the past. I'm researching writing, starting to make plans, trying to establish a framework within which to approach this endeavor. Looking at my older writing might be opening the door a little bit in my mind.
And now that poem I mentioned...
White Writing
white writing, unlinking thinking, no lingering fingers, no words left unheard, the way of the saying is not part of the meaning, it slips between the reeling tumbles of words, text, from the letters in front of my mind I don't see them I don't feel them they slide over the surface of my mind, spreading like oil, chattering like a razor across glass, spine shivering jangles of thoughts and letters, unfettered by structure not bound to the meaning by the purpose of mind, forgotten once written, once shy never bitten not mine but then whose
And now that poem I mentioned...
White Writing
white writing, unlinking thinking, no lingering fingers, no words left unheard, the way of the saying is not part of the meaning, it slips between the reeling tumbles of words, text, from the letters in front of my mind I don't see them I don't feel them they slide over the surface of my mind, spreading like oil, chattering like a razor across glass, spine shivering jangles of thoughts and letters, unfettered by structure not bound to the meaning by the purpose of mind, forgotten once written, once shy never bitten not mine but then whose
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